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Feedback:

Candidate 1- "I really like the way you have edited this layout. you made great use of this photo by            using a black and white effect to show the uniqueness of this singer".
                   - "the text is clear enough to read"
Candidate 2- "Your layout is more appropriate for a front cover as the image is central to the page"
                   - "the text looks so clear to read"
                   - "you used more colours for the text".
Candidate 3-  "The picture looks very perfect in black and white but it looks too big to include in the     contents page".
                   - "The page numbers looks very organised but i can see one of them not in the same     position to the other e.g. in the "Your Turn" section".