Feedback 3

Double Page Spread Process

Double Page Spread

Double Page Spread

Feedback

Candidate 1- "This look so much better than your first draft. You can actually read the content without the speckled background".

 Candidate 2- "I really love the layout. it's more clear and easy to read"

  Candidate 3- "The double page spread looks really good.  The columns look clear and organised to read".

Process

Contents page

Contents Page

Feedback:

Candidate 1- "I really like the way you have edited this layout. you made great use of this photo by            using a black and white effect to show the uniqueness of this singer".
                   - "the text is clear enough to read"
Candidate 2- "Your layout is more appropriate for a front cover as the image is central to the page"
                   - "the text looks so clear to read"
                   - "you used more colours for the text".
Candidate 3-  "The picture looks very perfect in black and white but it looks too big to include in the     contents page".
                   - "The page numbers looks very organised but i can see one of them not in the same     position to the other e.g. in the "Your Turn" section".
                 

Front Cover process

Front Cover

focused more on the blue colour scheme

changed centre image as the previous one was too pixelated and it cuts the full body

rearranged my magazine theory to a "C" theory 

made barcode/issue/date clear enough to read   

Front Cover

  Feedback received from my peers: as I had asked them to look at my second draft front cover, they mostly said the same things from another. For instance,
 Candidate 1- the picture is in low quality - use other colours and not just blue.
 Candidate 2- picture is in low quality and needs work - use other colours - interesting coverlines 
 Candidate 3- looks much better than your first draft. However, you need to edit more on your main image - use more colours to make the magazine not too limiting with just using blueish colours.

Feedback 2

Process for draft double page spread

Process for Double Page Spread

Draft double page spread

Double Page Spread

Process of contents page

Contents Page Process

Draft contents page

Contents Page

Process for draft front cover

The Process of My Draft Front Cover

Draft Front cover

Draft Front Cover

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